Week 11 Britian is changing By Donagh

One day a marmite factory exploded over Britian. Britian was covered in marmite and over fifty people died. From then on, nobody in Britian liked marmite anymore. Soon all the marmite factories in the country were smashed. The only one who liked marmite and made it was a man named Alex. It was tragic that more than fifty people died and it was tragic that marmite was illegal but this man could bring it back. He made a speech about how a lot of people in Britian liked it. But then the president came and said “Did you see what mar…. mar….marmite did to us all?…”. But then someone spoke up.”No”, he said ”I like marmite” and then they started to chant Alex. Then marmite was no longer illegal.

One thought on “Week 11 Britian is changing By Donagh”

  1. Hi Donagh,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    It was most original and I can almost hear the people chanting as I’m reading it.
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce

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