Week 13 Reindeer can fly by Alex K

In a very strange village, there was a child called Chris. The reason the village is strange is because everybody lives in holes and mountains and own exotic pets (the village was in the North Pole). Santa decided to invite Chris to his workshop. When Chris got there Santa asked him to help him deliver the presents for him because he didn’t want to do it himself. At that time, Chris didn’t know reindeer could fly. So when Santa told him to fly his sleigh, he was secretly optimistic about it so he went along with it. When Chris got on the sleigh, it started flying (because of the reindeer). Chris said to himself, ”I didn’t realise they could fly”.

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  1. Alex,
    I loved seeing your use of the word OPTIMISTIC because that is a trait we focus on in our school! I liked your piece because the narrator’s thoughts were very realistic and you set the scene well.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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