Week 2 The attack of the candy kingdom by Dylan

Once upon a time, there was a boy named Seán. He lived in a house next to an old warehouse. One day, he ran into the warehouse with his friend called Harry. When they went in, they saw a portal. It looked creepy so they jumped in. I know, that wasn’t the smartest move. Then everything stopped and they landed in this candy kingdom. The food was alive. The marshmallows were so kind. But then Harry ate one and all of the candy kingdom began to chase after them. They ran as fast as they could but they caught up to them. However, they broke out and ran back to the portal. They were back home. The next morning they woke up and the candy people were ruling the world.

One thought on “Week 2 The attack of the candy kingdom by Dylan”

  1. Hi Dylan.
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done!
    I had expected a happy ending – a bit like Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.
    I’m glad you managed to get back home but I’m wondering what will happen next?
    Mrs Boyce

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