Week 2 The billionaire man who jumps off the biggest sky scraper in the world by Daniel

Hi. I am a young billionaire and my name is Christiano Messi. I am going to jump off the biggest sky scraper in the world and wait until you her the cool thing I can do. I can stop time. I know your jealous I can do that. Tomorrow I am having a birthday party and the day after that I am jumping off the biggest skyscraper in the world. I am at my friend’s birthday party. We are playing soccer at the party and it’s really fun.

Today is finally the day I jump off the biggest skyscraper in the world. Also, I have a parashoot. I got pushed off the skyscraper by my brother. Luckily I had a parashoot and landed safely. Then everything stopped and…The End.

 

One thought on “Week 2 The billionaire man who jumps off the biggest sky scraper in the world by Daniel”

  1. Nice story, Daniel! It seems that you wrote a story about a young billionaire’s life, with a brief introduction about his ability, his friend’s birthday party and jumped off the skyscraper with parachute. It’s generally great, but sometimes it’s not easy for me to figure out the relations among all the things introduced in your story (like you mentioned that ‘I’ can stop time, but why do you introduce that?).

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