Week 27 The lost diamond By: David Hu.

One day I was walking in the woods. I stumbled upon a huge hole in the ground and I accidently dropped my book down it. I was so upset. There was a ladder so I climbed down. I found my book but then I saw a sparkle. I looked closer and it was a diamond. Someone must have lost it, I thought. Suddenly, I heard growling. I was scared so I climbed the ladder and got out as fast as I could. Unexpectedly, I saw a vicious dog sprinting towards me. I ran towards the woods as fast as I could. The dog was gone and I was ok. I had a lucky escape!

One thought on “Week 27 The lost diamond By: David Hu.”

  1. Hi David,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    Wow – you had a lucky escape! I wonder did you find an owner for the diamond?
    I thought I had found a diamond under the chair last week.
    I could see the sparkle but sadly it was only the sunlight reflecting on a nut or bolt!
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing!

    Mrs Boyce

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