Week 28 The Kidnapper by Warren

There were less creatures everyday. There would always be at least five birds outside the back garden but now it’s down to two. It’s getting strange. I barely see any cats nowadays either and believe me my estate was full of cats before. So one day, I went adventuring around and everything seemed normal. Just then, I looked to my right and a cat disappeared into a black portal. I knew it was risky but I did it. When I got in, it looked dark and was infested with moss. Then, the sight that revealed everything. It was a  weird looking man putting all sorts of animals into black cloaks. It turned out he was he was trying to take every animal from my neighbourhood so I just ran. What next?

4 thoughts on “Week 28 The Kidnapper by Warren”

  1. Why would he want so many animals? You’ve left the door open for what’s next after you’ve escaped, caught your breath and… Lucky that you did escape!

    Good job Warren!

  2. Hi Warren,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I wonder what was the man planning for the animals? Was he saving them? Or was there something more sinister going on?
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


  3. Hi Warren,
    I wonder did you see the man’s face,
    Where did you get this idea from,
    Goodbye from Szymon,
    Mrs Boyce’s Class.

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