Week 28: The Last Day: Dan

SMASH!  I could see a whole army of them crawling rapidly towards the lawn. I grabbed my bike and pedaled as fast as I possibly could. I needed to go to NASA . They were flying their last Rocket to Mars today, it was the only way to avoid the mutant lizards.

I could feel the air around me getting dense from their toxic skin. I was nearly there. I knew I couldn’t give in. I hopped off my bike and ran up the ramp to the door of the rocket and threw myself in. There was a lot of people inside. I closed the door and sat down.

“Mars, here I come”, I breathed.

3 thoughts on “Week 28: The Last Day: Dan”

  1. Hi Dan,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    Getting on that rocket sounds like the only way to survive- good move!
    I’m wondering will life on Mars be any better?
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


  2. Hi Dan
    I really liked the similes you used.
    I hope it will be better in Mars.
    How will you survive in Mars?
    Bye for now Marc
    Mrs Boyces Class

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