Week 29: A Day Away: By Dan

Today, I am going to visit my cousin Tim. He lives near the beach. He says the sand is golden brown and the sea is crystal clear. Eventually, I arrived at his house but there was no one there. I took out my map of the town and  searched for a cafe called the ‘Tall Giraffe’. I knew Tim worked there. It was a melting hot day and all I wanted to do was to dip my feet in the cool salt water but I promised to meet Tim. I walked to the cafe and was offered a greasy burger by Tim . It was a great day away.

2 thoughts on “Week 29: A Day Away: By Dan”

  1. Hi Dan
    You did a great job of incorporating the 5 words for this weeks 100WC. You wrote an interesting story using the words. I especially like how you spread the words out through the whole story. Your writing gave me a real sense of what you were experiencing – I could see the sea and the sand in my head. Well done.

    Helen (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand

  2. Hi Dan,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    It sounds like a wonderful place – the golden brown sand and the crystal clear water really appeal to me.
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


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