Week 29 The Zoo by Conor C

I asked Dad ‘Can I bring my friend?’ and Dad said ‘Yes’. Then, he took us so we were happy. We went to the car and started our journey to Cork city. It took 3 hours and we decided to go play soccer. We then went to the zoo to see the giraffes. We went to the shop to buy some sweets but we were happy enough to just get tic tacs. We didn’t spend all of our pocket money which meant we would have more for our next trip. Lucky us! We then decided to make our way home. The End.

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  1. You’ve made a day spent with friends and family sound like a wonderful experience Conor. Best of all, for me, is being careful not to waste spending money so there’s more for next time. Love it!
    Couldn’t help notice though that you only seemed to use one of the five prompt words. Maybe try for all of them the next time there’s a five-word Challenge?
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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