Week 3 Bad Day by Marcel

My family and I went on our bicycles and then there was a storm so we started cycling as fast as we could. It started to rain so we went into a building. After it stopped the sky turned yellow. Then we wanted to drive on the road. My sister was making tracks on the bike and the police were not far behind. They were chasing us. The End.

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  1. Good job, Marcel! I can see that it’s a bad day for you met a storm and chased by the police when you were cycling on road, which were connected smoothly and reasonably in your writing. Hope to see your progress next week!

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