Week 3 The Man In Black By Micheál

I begged my parents to allow me to explore the creepy, old cottage at the end of the lane. When I entered, two things pounced on me. Suddenly, a light appeared. I saw that the things were big, bulky men with swords. Behind them stood a tall, thin man in a black suit. They never should have said yes, I thought to myself.
“You foolish boy! Why did you come here?”
The man in black  went so red in the face I thought he would explode! I screamed and just then soldiers burst through the door! The man in the black suit disappeared in a puff of smoke!