Week 31 The foggy night by Alex O’ C

One night, there was a man named Jeffrey. It was the foggiest night he had ever seen. He could barely see anything that lay in front of him. Suddenly, he saw something run by. He ran as fast as he could in the opposite direction but then he got tackled by it.

He woke up inside a warehouse and there were a lot of people around him that were armed with guns. He hid in a box next to him. Then, a guard turned around and he wasn’t there. He spoke through his radio to the other guards and he said that Jeffery was nowhere to be seen. They all started searching but Jeffery made a lucky escape.As he ran, he stumbled across an amazing tree.

One thought on “Week 31 The foggy night by Alex O’ C”

  1. Hi Alex,

    This is a great piece. I want to know more and how Jeffrey managed to escape! Next week, I would love to see you using the prompt even more throughout the story.

    You clearly have a knack for writing – keep up the good work.

    Alexandra

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