Week 32 The night by Jayden

One day my friend and I were in the woods. We went to an old abandoned house that we came across on our walk. There was a light on outside. Suddenly, there was a deafening loud noise. There was a man standing at the window. He looked to be an elderly man. It was starting to get dark. My friend and I weren’t sure of the way out of the woods. In no time, the door of the house opened, the man grabbed us and he took us inside.

He locked us up in a cell and put the key on the locker beside him. Eventually, the man fell asleep and we knew this was our only chance. We tried all that we could to reach the key. Luckily, I grabbed it and unlocked the cell. We ran as fast as our legs could carry us. We disappeared into the night. Finally, we reached home and Mom rang the police. To our horror, they said that no such house exists.

One thought on “Week 32 The night by Jayden”

  1. Hi Jayden,
    What a wonderfully creepy story! I really enjoyed it. You used some great language and structured it extremely well. Keep up the good work!
    Mrs O Sullivan.

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