Week 32 The Rose By Joe

How could I have forgotten it was my moms birthday. I asked my sister if she could put my name on her card but she said no. I didn’t know what to do, I was running out of time . The only way I could make it is if I went down to the park to get a rose.

I was very excited to go on a heist. It was late at night and it was nearly pitch black. I got on my scooter and when I got off I saw the most beautiful rose of all time. It nearly looked transparent, it really did.

When I got home and showed my mom she loved it and told me that it was the most beautiful flower she had ever seen.

 

3 thoughts on “Week 32 The Rose By Joe”

  1. Joe,
    I love that seeing the word ROSE in the challenge made you think of a character buying a present for his Mom–so sweet.
    Your words are powerful.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Hi Joe
    I like your story because of the part were you saw the most beautiful rose ever and you gave it to your sister.
    Please comment on my stories
    Bye for now
    Conor!

  3. Hi Joe
    I liked the way that you went on a heist and found a transparent rose
    Please comment on my stories
    Bye
    Colin

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