Week 33 Strange Night By Sam

There was a police man named Bob.

One night he heard two women scream. The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. He got in his car and drove in the direction of the screaming. When he arrived the women were screaming even louder! He looked around and saw nothing. “Whats wrong with you two?” Bob asked. “THAT THING! ON THE GROUND!!!!!” One of them shouted. “It’s just a raccoon!” He laughed. “ARE YOU LAUGHING AT US??????” The women both said in anger. “No! I’m was just trying to help!” He said. They stormed off in a fit of rage. Bob laughed it off.

That was a strange interaction.

One thought on “Week 33 Strange Night By Sam”

  1. Kia ora from New Zealand Sam.
    Well, yes indeed that certainly was a strange interaction!
    I like the way that the two women were really indignant and obviously yelling in their capital letter way. If you are using capital letters, you are really emphasising what is being said, so you actually do not need to have multiple question marks or exclamation marks. In fact, one of these is just enough! Perhaps that is something for you to think about for the future.
    If you get a chance, come along and look at my class blog – we love having visitors. https://rakau19.edublogs.org/
    Ms M #100WC

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