Week 33 The murderer By Kristupas

One day, I came back from school and I got an instant phone call from the police station. They shouted “Come to the station immediately!” I went to the kitchen and tried to tell my mom but couldn’t find her. Then I noticed the hat. I ran out of the house and sprinted to the police station. When I got there, they told me my mother past away. I bursted into tears. Then I asked “why was that hat on the table?” They told me that there was a murderer in my house and was waiting for me. “You were very lucky you escaped.” “Never go back, stay here and we will take care of you for now!”

One thought on “Week 33 The murderer By Kristupas”

  1. Hi Kristupas,

    What a scary story! Did the hat belong to the murderer? (Your poor mother) and how did the police know to ring the house? Were they watching you?

    Imagine having to live with the police and never seeing your parents again. How sad would that be?

    Well done for your imaginative response to the prompt.

    Michelle, Team 100wc
    Melbourne, Australia

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