Week 34 The Jungle by Jayden

One day, I was going on an adventure through the jungle. I came across a box and I said to my friends, ‘let’s go and check this out’. We opened it up and saw different things inside. All of a sudden, a leaf fell from the sky and landed on my head. My friend started laughing as he saw a raccoon pop out of the trees and snatch the box. We chased after it. When the raccoon stopped, we realised that we were after losing our track back. We came across an old chair, a cup and some left overs. We knew someone had to be around. We kept walking until we heard a loud scream for help. It was a man’s voice echoing in the distance. We could see he was tangled up in a long rope. We tried our best to help get him down but we struggled. Suddenly, a woman appeared out of nowhere, laughing. The man had set the trap for the raccoon but he caught himself in it instead!

One thought on “Week 34 The Jungle by Jayden”

  1. Hi Jayden
    Great story with an incredible twist! You have really used the words for this week’s prompt very well. I always think that the prompts with just five words are the hardest as I think you have to really use your imagination to create a picture in your reader’s mind. You obviously have a great imagination as this piece is so creative and I felt, reading it, that I was in the jungle watching as you chased the racoon and then came across the man tangled in the trap.
    Well done! Keep writing.
    Máire O’Keeffe Team 100wc
    Galway, Ireland

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