Week 37 The gold tree by Jayden

One day, I was on a nice walk in the countryside. As I was walking along, I heard a dog. I followed the sound and went towards it. To my surprise, I saw a gold tree and next to the tree was a viola. I saw a little boy that looked lost to me. He told me he got lost on his way searching for an ancient gem. I told him I knew the way back to the city and that he could follow me if he wanted to. The little boy agreed. On our way back, we came across his parents who were very scared and upset as they had been out searching for the boy all day. I had rescued their little boy and was rewarded with a beautiful bike as a gift from his family. The End.

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  1. Hi Jayden – what a neat story, with some descriptive words to create a scene. My favourite sentence is “To my surprise, I saw a gold tree and next to the tree was a viola.” I really like how you started this sentence. What happened to the dog? Look forward to reading more of your writing. Ms T, Waikanae, New Zealand

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