Week 4 Back to the future by Oran

Hi my name is Harry. Do you know the movie back to the future? Well it is 2019 now and I broke into a scientist lab and got shot. Good thing my mom is a doctor. Now I am in 1903. But I am supposed to steal the Dolorian flying  car so I’ll try to find it. Two hours later. ‘Oh no, Doc’, I said. ‘How do you know my name?’, said Doc. ‘The movie’, Harry replied. ‘Oh no’, said Doc. ‘So you want a spin?’. ‘Of course’, we replied. Two minutes later and Harry said ‘my turn!’. ‘Ah ok’, said Doc. It just turned off.  ‘Try again’, said Doc. ‘Ok’, said Harry. Yes! No ‘nooooooooooo’. It just wouldn’t take off.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          THE END.

One thought on “Week 4 Back to the future by Oran”

1. Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) says:

Hello Oran, I don’t know the movie, “Back to the Future” very well, so I was a bit confused about the names and the flying car. I was, however, still able to tell what was happening. I like the way you emphasised “nooooo…” to show the frustration about the car not taking off. Well done.