Week 5 Man of Silver by Gavin

There was a man that was steel and silver. He was looking up all the time. He looks like a giant and he can’t move. He wandered off to a place where he enjoys. This place is crowded he thought. He still woke them all. The park had a playground and there were dogs there most of the time. Then he went out of it and he landed at the zoo. Most times there where animals all around the place. He went out of it and then he went to the place he was looking for. He was happy now. THE END.


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  1. Hi Gavin,
    Great story! I like how you though of lots of different locations for the statue to travel to and I’m glad he found his happy place in the end. Just check the spelling of “were”. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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