Week 5 The tall skinny man by David HY.

A few months ago, I came out of school and I saw Tom Friedman making a statue at the roundabout. I really wanted an autograph but I didn’t want to embarrass myself so I just scruntinised it closely hoping he’d ask me something but he didn’t. The next day it was finished. It was a tall skinny man looking up to the sky. I walked into school only thinking about how fun it would be to hang off its head. The second school finished, I rushed out and scrambled up the statue. I had been hanging for about five minutes now. After another few minutes I heard a crack and the head fell along with me. Oh No!

2 thoughts on “Week 5 The tall skinny man by David HY.”

  1. Hi David,
    Well done. I love your story. You used some terrific words, I especially liked the verb ‘scrutinised’. Thank goodness you survived the fall!
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs O Sullivan.

  2. Hi David,
    Great story! Well done on using interesting vocabulary like “scrambled”. I especially like the part at the end when the main character caused the head to fall off- great idea! Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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