Week 6 The jungle adventure by David Hy.

Last month there was a weightlifting competition and Joe Mc Carthy the famous weightlifting champion was in it. Four hours before it started his boss asked me to get his weight. He said it was out in the jungle and down a hole. I wondered why they kept it in the jungle? So I set off.  After a few more minutes, I heard a monkey and without any warning a big fat monkey came charging into my face. I took it off me and put it in a bush. When I finally got to the hole, there was a ladder going down it. After a lot of climbing, I eventually saw the weight. I tried lifting it but it was heavier then I expected. And the second I lifted it I disappeared…

2 thoughts on “Week 6 The jungle adventure by David Hy.”

  1. Hi David,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    It sounds like they were trying to get rid of you – I wonder why?
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce

  2. Hi David, what a mystery! What were they doing sending you to the jungle? I really like how you included your doubt about why the weights were in the jungle. I also think that showing you could deal quite easily with the attacking monkey worked well too. It made me think you would be able to lift the weights BUT alas, they weren’t just ordinary weights; they made you disappear.

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