Week 7 Gucci granny by Tom

I have been working on a time machine since I was five but I’m ten now. It can take you anywhere any time any place. It’s in my garage and nobody know about it. My younger sister got a guinea pig and I’m going to be testing with it. I got the guinea pig the next morning but I heard a loud shout ‘but but where did it go?’, she shouted. I ran to the garage and put him in. It started to shake and it just froze. An old lady popped out and said ‘I’m Gucci granny’. I stopped and I fainted. The End.

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  1. Travelling through time and space; what a wonderful idea Tom. I’m not fully clear about the ending though – did the guinea pig change into something called ‘Gucci Granny’? Could you think of a way of making this a little clearer for your readers?
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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